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Majick
#1 YoFiend

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:41 am

Yo was new to my gaming world, It held so many choices
Players used pixel outfits, To represent their voices

I'd seen Fireman and Pirate, Cool but not the bomb
Red balls of Ladybug, I could not wait to try them on

Naturewoman had laurels, white hair of Mr. Snow
So many pretty pixels, But I knew which way I'd go

While they all had merit, Only one had caught my eye
I traded stuff so furiously, Until I had the coins to buy

The day had finally come, A shopping I would go
I hunted through Yo's events for my Gray Burrito

The sellers they were rare, A mysterious lot they were
But then I found the one, Who provided me my cure

I refreshed and came to Yo, My game had surely changed
If I was mad before, I now had become insane

As I scanned my costumes, Seeking my newest prize
It finally showed up on the list, Right before my eyes

The Ninja is not a costume, It is a holy scion
Surely you understand, If you have ever tried it on

Your Yo's demeanor changes, Simply when you hit 'save'
You enter Yo reborn, A Ninja you've been made

You drift through Yo's shadows, An ether to its void
The Gray Burrito rides again!!! (Yes, I'm a 12 year old boy)

:ugeek:

Bullet
YoGroupie

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:44 am

No poetry in the morning.

Lella
YoAdmirer

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Registered: Sep 08, 2009
Posts: 2221

Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:44 am

Excellent.

RENEE
YoCrazy

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Posts: 21601

Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:47 am

I was never particular about the 08 costumes. Especially the Ninja...............OMG.......have you changed my mind????

Jericho
YoWild

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:48 am

That was beautiful. :geek:

Viking John
YoWorld Team

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:58 am

It's very hard resisting temptation to edit your topic to say "The Gary Burrito"...

llama
YoWild

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:59 am

Viking John wrote:It's very hard resisting temptation to edit your topic to say "The Gary Burrito"...

Kio
YoFiend

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 9:59 am

Viking John wrote:It's very hard resisting temptation to edit your topic to say "The Gary Burrito"...

I read it as that! LOL

Jericho
YoWild

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:00 am

Too early for burritos in the morning...

StephMarie
YoDedicated

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Registered: Oct 19, 2009
Posts: 5439

Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:00 am

Super cute poem, you really have a way with words and story telling when you write your poems!

I've never owned the ninja, it's not really my thing, but your yo looks cool sporting the robe with it :lol:

CountryDude89
YoCrazy

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:01 am

How ya bean Rodd? I see your a good taco, everyone listens!

Casual Cat
YoSupporter

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:10 am

Good stuff

XxVioletVixenxX
YoBeliever

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:13 am

Viking John wrote:It's very hard resisting temptation to edit your topic to say "The Gary Burrito"...

Hahahahaha

Wonderful poem!! Glad you got your outfit!!!

Nina
YoAficionado

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Registered: Sep 24, 2008
Posts: 3447

Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:31 am

Is the costume new Rod? Or does it refer to the purchase in the past?

Anyway, good poem

Majick
#1 YoFiend

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:33 am

Nina (2904106) wrote:Is the costume new Rod? Or does it refer to the purchase the past?

Anyway, good poem

I bought it for 3 mill. That should tell you how ancient it is. I need to wash it. LOL

PS - Be safe.

Lainie
YoCrazy

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:37 am

Aw... I'm partial to odd odes.... :lol:

Amilli
YoRegular

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:40 am

haha cute

Jennifer
YoDedicated

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:41 am

Viking John wrote:It's very hard resisting temptation to edit your topic to say "The Gary Burrito"...

Resisting temptation is overrated really...I say go for it!

Nina
YoAficionado

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Tue Jul 15, 2014 10:44 am

Hot Rod (126579776) wrote:
Nina (2904106) wrote:Is the costume new Rod? Or does it refer to the purchase the past?

Anyway, good poem

I bought it for 3 mill. That should tell you how ancient it is. I need to wash it. LOL

PS - Be safe.

Thanks, I will

Nik Nak
YoFan

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Registered: Jul 31, 2009
Posts: 1808

Tue Jul 15, 2014 11:21 am

Rod you have a way with words!

Enjoy reading your posts, and poems! Great look btw